iziningishzidda's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hummingfox]

I think the background is fine, if you made it more detailed it would take attention away from the focal point. One thing going on here is the bird and flower need to be unified a little better. It would help if their were flowers or leaves off the branch he was on "leading" into the flower to make the focal point more powerful.

Maquenda responds:

Thank you! This is quite useful :)

[Star Keeper]

I think you may benefit from some composition study - work out the shapes beforehand and you'll come up with more powerful ways to utilize the objects and negative space in the work.

[Sand]

This is adorable, great job. It would honestly be more effective with a background and the rest of the torso completed, but I understand it's a sketch.

Maquenda responds:

No it's finished, but this is a commission, which didn't have a background :)

[the Hardcore Touch]

This is funny.

[S<3T: Tentacle Grape]

So this is the result of the Fukushima power plant meltdown.

[Stairs]

This is a really good study, you should be proud of it. I'd work on getting those lines straighter, due to the "swoosh" thing going on in the light on the stairs.

Sulup responds:

I apreciate it and i'll keep an eye on that ;)

[Travie McCoy]

Very nice